http://denilmo.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] denilmo.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] silverfoxflower 2011-08-03 10:16 pm (UTC)

A-hahaha XD
This was great! It really brightened my day! Cake-covered Iruka and sneaky!Kakashi (with his problem-solving penis) really made me smile. I particularly loved the part where Kakashi crawled over Iruka, begging him to show him what it looked like - when Iruka took his hand and ran it along his body as he told him where he had gotten cake on himself. That was just... wonderful.
The setting and the chemistry you wrote between the two of them was so enjoyable. It was a great read! Thanks for sharing!

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