http://troublesome-jv.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] troublesome-jv.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] silverfoxflower 2011-09-19 02:44 pm (UTC)

This was lovely :)

I think my favorite conversation was "is that all?". It was light and funny, but also somewhat nerve wracking.
I also love how matter-of-fact Kakashi is and how he's attracted to Iruka's neck. It's something I haven't seen before, and I love your take on it.
And I loved the happy ending, although I actually would have been happy with a sad ending as well :)

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